The Magic Colorful Village

So this is my short story writing result. I joined a short story writing contest at my school when i was 7 grader. And alhamdulillah I won the contest

I won the contest, but it wasn't the best, I'm not a professional writer. hehe..

So i just want to share my short story, hopefully you enjoy my short story

The Magic Colorful Village

Once upon a time, there were two friends named Lisa and Benny. They always play and travel together. One day, they are walking around the forest while looking at the beauty of the forest and talking for each other.” Benny!! Look, there are two big and tall trees, and look at the color, it is colorful. Do you know the name of those trees?” Lisa asked to Benny. “Hmm... I do not know. But, let me think…” Benny starts thinking. Five minutes later “Aha! I remember, but I am not sure.” Benny said. With the curiosity Lisa asked Benny again “So what Benny? Just tell me, I really want to know”. Then Benny tells Lisa “Okay Lisa, as I remembered, peoples name it as Magic Colorful Tree.” Lisa asked again. “Magic Colorful tree? What a weird name. Hmm... Do you want to find out more about the trees?” “Hmm… Okay let’s go” Benny said. Then, they are walking around the trees.” Hey Lisa, what is that big hole?” Benny asked. “Let’s look at the hole nearly” Lisa said. When they look at the hole, suddenly... “Aaaahh!!” Benny and Lisa screamed. They fall down into the very deep and winding hole, and then they arrive at the unknown beautiful place.”What is this place?? This is very beautiful. Am I dreaming?” Lisa asked while confusing. “Wake up Lisa! You aren’t dreaming. It is a really beautiful place that we ever met” Benny said. “Let’s find a village here.” Then, they walk along the street looking for the nearest village at this place. After many hours of their search, finally they found a village. But, the village that they found was destroyed, just like there had been a war between the villages in this village. They are very confused. Luckily, they found a person here. “Excuse me, are you the villager in this village?” Lisa asked to that man. “Yes I am, who are you? I just saw a stranger here.”Said the man. Then, Lisa and Benny tell the man that they fall down from the big, deep and winding hole from a hole near a tree and arrive at here. Then, Lisa and Benny ask him back, where is this? What happen to the village? Then the man tells them about this place. This place’s name is Magic Colorful Village. This place is full of magic. The village was destroyed because of the witch named Victoria with her men were destroyed the village. The villager were be damned by the witch into a mouse field. After they destroy the village they burned the village until run out. The man is the only person which still alive. Lisa and Benny are feeling sad too when they hear the story. Then Benny asks the man that is there any way to erase the condemnation. The man said yes, there is a way to erase the condemnation. The way is by kill the witch with the Silver Dragon Sword. The Silver Dragon Sword is in the Silver Village, the distance is about 100 km from here. Then Benny and Lisa promise to the man that they will erase the condemnation and repair the village.

Before Lisa and Benny go to the Silver Village, the man is gives a horse which still alive and magic wand. The man is not forgetting to give the powerful spell for fight any monster, people except witch like Victoria and dragons. The spell is “Avuesmenintdhra Ouvastra!” Finally, they go to the Silver Village with horse which still alive from that village. 5 Hours later, they arrive at Red Village. They stayed there for one night. Early in the morning, they continue their journey to the Silver Village. On the way, there are many obstructions like storm along the day, thick fog, and more. After 2 days, they arrive at Orange Village. Luckily, in there they greeted with a friendly. Then, they meet the village heads and tell what happen to them. After Lisa and Benny tell the village heads, the village heads gives them some solutions. The solutions is search the Rainbow Diamond on the Gold Hill for make it easily to kill the witch. But the problem is one, there is a fierce dragon. To fight the dragon they need to find the Rainbow Sword at the Rainbow Village. The, they continue their journey. They will go to Rainbow Village first. When they got there, the village is full of monsters. So, they should fight them. Luckily they have a magic wand, so they can easily fight them with the magic. After they fight them, “I think there is no more” Lisa said. And then, they start finding the Rainbow Sword. But, what happen? Suddenly, another monster appears from the back of the tree, but the big one! “Wow! One trouble appears!” Lisa and Benny said. “Lisa, do you remember the spell that the man gave to us? I remember it” Asks Benny while running. “Yes, of course. Let’s say together!” Lisa replied. Then they say the spell together. “Avuesmenintdhra Ouvastra!” At a glance, the monster dies. “Yeah! We did it!” Benny screamed. Suddenly “Look Benny, I found the sword!” Lisa said. Then after they found the sword they continue to the Gold Hill. 3 days later they arrive at Gold Hill. “So where is the diamond?!” Lisa screamed. “Sssstt... Don’t be noisy, there is a dragon Lisa. But we are lucky, the dragon is sleeping” Benny whispered. After a several minutes they are searching the diamond, finally they found the Rainbow Diamond. But when they take the diamond, the dragon is wake up. “Oh my God! I do not like this” Lisa said “Me too” Benny replied. They are running away from the dragon with a fear. “Lisa, the sword!” Benny screamed. Finally, with no fear, Benny pierces the dragon with the sword. And, the dragon dies. After that, they continue their journey to the Silver Village. “Finally!! Hahaha!!”  Benny laughed. 1 day later they arrive at the Silver Village. In there, there is a preparation to fight with Victoria. Luckily again, they greeted with a friendly. As usual, they meet the village heads, and asking about the Silver Dragon Sword and about the Rainbow Diamond. The village heads is surprising. Then the village heads quickly give the sword. “Quick, stick the Silver Dragon Sword to the Rainbow Diamond, if you need, you can stick the Rainbow Sword.” Said the village heads. “Let’s do it!”Lisa and Benny said. Then they stick the swords together to the Rainbow Diamond. And suddenly the sword chance into Gold Diamond Dragon Sword. “What a fantastic sword! I love it!” Lisa said. “Yeah! Ready for war everyone??!!” Benny asked and screamed. “YES!!!!” All villagers screamed. Finally, they go to Victoria’s places, that is The Darkness Forest. They greeted with many monsters. Of course, first they must fight with many monsters and fight with the monster boss. After they finish fighting with many monsters, now, the monster boss turns. As usual, they say the spell together. “Avuesmenintdhra Ouvastra!” But, there is something wrong, why the monster does not die?  Apparently, the monster was already spelled by Victoria. “So how can we beat that monster??” Lisa asked. “With the sword of course!” Benny replied. It is true! The monster dies with that sword. Then, they must beat Victoria. “Hahahahahahahaha!!!! Finally, you found me!! Hahahaha!!” Victoria laughed. “Victoria! I will kill you!” Lisa threatens. “Kill me if you can” Victoria replied. “Don’t run away Victoria! We will kill you!” Benny Threatens too. In a rage, Lisa throws the sword to Victoria. And magic! The sword is directly hit Victoria! And Victoria dies! “Yeaaaahh!!!!! We did it!!!” Lisa screamed. “Good throw Lisa! Good Throw!! Good Lisa! Good!” Benny Screamed too. “VICTORY!!!!!!!!!!!” The villagers screamed.

After Victoria’s death, all the condemnations are erased. Lisa and Benny help the villagers to fix all the villages. In the end, Magic Colorful Village becomes a beautiful, success, prosperous, safe, good and peaceful village. The villagers are happy and thanks to Lisa and Benny because save their village from the witch. The villagers held a party to celebrate this victory. The next day the villagers drove them to the border village and give them a souvenir for memory. “Oh, I will miss this beautiful place. Why we must go home?”Lisa said while crying. “Me too, I will really really miss this village” Benny said while crying too. “You can come back and play with us again. You can come and play with us every day and every time” Said the villagers while crying too. After Lisa and Benny say goodbye to each other they go home with happiness, sadness and feel proud.

After Lisa and Benny go back to home, they keep about The Magic Colorful Village. No one knows about The Magic Colorful Village except Lisa and Benny of course. And the hole is close by Lisa and Benny and of course by the villagers in there too.

THE END

Written by : Narita Luthfiana